Y NEWS NAME: Florian Ruch RATE
IT
Group Member: Iris Aguado
Title: N/A 1 2 3
Hook: N/A 1 2 3
Lead: N/A 1 2 3
Body: N/A 1 2 3
Quotes: N/A Included
Overall: 1 2 3 4 5
(1= weak / 2= so-so / 3= good / 4=
very good / 5= excellent)
Why: I gave a 2 for the title because that it didn’t represent the content very well, a
title like “Flappy bird flies away” would have been better.
The hook is fine, it introduces the text very well and it keeps the
reader’s attention.
The lead wasn’t perfect, I found the information; what and who, but the
information; when and where were missing.
The body
was great, we found the information “how and why”, and some quotes were used.
The
overall text was great, even if it wasn’t an easy subject to talk about.
Group Member: Tyler
Title: N/A 1 2 3
Hook: N/A 1 2 3
Lead: N/A 1 2 3
Body: N/A 1 2 3
Quotes: N/A Included
Overall: 1 2 3 4 5 (1=
weak / 2= so-so / 3= good / 4= very good / 5= excellent)
Why: The title
is clear, it is well-said, and the reader wants to read more.
The hook is fine, it introduces the text well.
The lead is perfect, it answers the questions; where, what,
who and when
The body was also perfect, it answers the question; why and
how, and it says good information.
The only thing that isn’t perfect in Tyler’s article is that
he didn’t put quotes in it.
The overall text is good, we know everything that we should know.
The adding of pictures is also something cool.
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